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cinnamongirl
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0 posted 2003-02-03 09:15 PM




I close my eyes to the world,
And my eyes are finally opened.
God breathes Her fingers through
My hair,
Soothes my tragic mind within.
She brings Light into the Darkness
And Darkness into the blinding Light
So that I may see with clarity inside
The beauty in full sight.
I curl myself upon Her lap,
I curl myself up inside my Heart.
I dream of looking into Her eyes
Her eyes I can only see within my Self.
I close my eyes to pain
To close my eyes to my Sun, and
Drink in my newfound Rain
That pours from my eyes like
Rivers down my face...
Saturating my barren soul so that
Life can grow again.  


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1 posted 2003-02-03 10:09 PM


Great images of your oneness with God.  Joyce
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2 posted 2003-02-03 11:50 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, She loves you so very much and she will bring you grace, strength, necessity and, most importantly, love and its many great qualities! (sigh) This is beautifully uplifting, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-04 09:36 AM


Beautifuly written and very powerful.
Eric

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2003-02-04 04:14 PM


I love what goes on there inside your spirit world... The soothing of your mind, the perfect balance between light and darkness, and the wonderful cleansing that brings new spiritual understanding and growth... WOW!!! What a beautiful world you have within to visit and to hangout in. Good job. Cinnamongirl, I hope you'll be back real soon to share more of your special world with us. Love and GOD bless.

-Bob

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5 posted 2003-02-06 09:08 PM


this is really beautiful, calming, soothing...
I love it.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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