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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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0 posted 2003-01-17 12:33 PM




God's Kisses

Outside your sleep,
Soft tapping window speaks
Love whispers, honeysuckle sweet,
The rain.


-Lighthouse Bob
© Copyright 2003 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
NewEnglandlazurlu
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1 posted 2003-01-17 06:29 PM

Bob, beautiful picture and I just love the cinquain. I am such a fan of 'short poems'; so few words, such a big message.

Blessings, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.
Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2003-01-17 07:56 PM

Bob...Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing...Paul

Softly tapping on window pane
This gift from God
A soft gentle rain

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-01-17 08:48 PM



(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me smile to imagine a little girl waking up and smiling seeing the rain fall and little hummingbirds and squirrels and bluebirds of happiness smiling! (big hugggsssssss) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira
SPIRIT
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4 posted 2003-01-17 09:45 PM

Beautiful picture and so much said in so few words. As always quality far outweighs quantity. Lovely!!!!!!!
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5 posted 2003-01-18 12:24 PM

I shall never quite hear the raindrops again after reading this beautiful piece.
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6 posted 2003-01-18 09:29 AM

Truly lovely Bob.  Joyce
Songbird
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7 posted 2003-01-18 10:10 PM

Lovely image.
jjote
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since 2002-12-25
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Ontario, Canada
8 posted 2003-01-20 09:10 PM

I like cinquain. And I love yours, including the image. I just can't get to put one when I tried.
Miah
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9 posted 2003-01-20 09:12 PM

Powerful impact.
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