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SPIRIT
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0 posted 2003-01-16 06:46 PM



THE CORRIDOR

We are walled in
Within the Corridors of Life.
A passageway  entered
At birth
With death, on this plain
The final destination.

May the doors
We open
To enter unknown rooms
During the walkthrough
Of our lives,
Lead us towards honesty,
Moral integrity
Wonderful family,
Great friendships,
The joy of living
And all this and more
Within the Corridors of Life.

I am an enigma, even unto myself.
A puzzle unsolved, a mystery maybe until beyond death.  ©das


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1 posted 2003-01-16 07:09 PM


And I hope we all walk down the hall of faith to understanding and humility.  Loved this piece.

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2 posted 2003-01-16 07:36 PM


Nice piece, Sprit.  Some of us can only look backwards to see if we have lived as we should.  Joyce
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3 posted 2003-01-16 08:46 PM


What a wonderful wish for our lives... we all have choices, and I hope that your choices are always good to you. Thanks for sharing.

Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ

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4 posted 2003-01-16 10:46 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, ay we all make a foundation in the walls of life and a fountain for a centerpiece to drink of blessings forever! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Das, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2003-01-17 01:20 PM


When I think of corridors, I think of long halls with lots and lots of doors... I think this is a great analogy of life that you've made here.  When I think of corridors, I also think of all the people who are institutionalized in one way or another... Be it school children, be it patients in a hospital, be it government officials, etc. etc. I think of all of those people who are in need of prayer behind those doors.  I think that you are right here my friend that there are plenty of opportunities in life to show our positive character traits that you have mentioned in your poem. We just need to take a little "walk through" once in awhile. GOD bless.

-Bob

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6 posted 2003-01-17 02:19 PM


SPIRIT:  Good poem and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Betty Lou Hebert

SPIRIT
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7 posted 2003-01-18 02:30 PM


Thank you. Appreciated.
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8 posted 2003-01-18 11:33 PM


SPIRIT~ Very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.
May Gods light lead us down the corridors of life...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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