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LADY_DEATH
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 105
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0 posted 2002-12-27 03:59 PM


            Feelings from the Heart


These emotions that i feel for you
Doesn't compare to anything else
I've ever felt before
A true love i found
A true love...i'll never let go
Sometimes we have disagreements
But nothing will change my mind
On the fact"I Love You More Than Life Itself"
Without you, An empty life i'd have
I've been down that road, and i don't want to go back


Please don't doubt my feelings
My love for you is aa guaranteee
Sealed with a silent vow
And a promise of devotion
A listening partner i shall be
On the hopes that one day we'll be married


© Copyright 2002 LADY_DEATH - All Rights Reserved
aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
1 posted 2002-12-27 10:40 PM


very heartfelt poem. It touches my heart. I hope in the coming year, you can always find hopes. Bless you, my friend

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2002-12-28 12:18 PM


For me, your poem expresses very nicely the verse that reads no greater love is there than this among humankind that a man (or a woman for that matter) might lay down their lives for a friend.  I feel that this is a true expression of one's love and devotion expressed here... and I do wish that more marriages would have and keep this kind of commitment toward one another... A life commitment.  Amen.  Good job and God bless you my poet friend.

-Bob

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since 2000-12-17
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3 posted 2003-01-01 06:39 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a beautiful declaration of love I know your sweetheart will deeply be touched by, yay! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



Mayn love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
4 posted 2003-01-02 09:34 PM


Hope your year is filled with happy days and a wedding. Very nice read.

Gentle breezes,
Wafting through my consciousness.
A pleasant awakening,
Reminding me of the contentment's
Of my life.   ©spirit


  

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