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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-12-17 09:11 PM


When the night is in his nap,
When the wave sounds out its snores,
I carve out a beautiful home...on the golden sand
Which represents you and me, he and she...a home under heaven...
To warm us in day and night.
Happy Season Greeting...from
A friend
  Me...Vivian

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2002-12-18 12:54 PM


Eliza:  This is just lovely.  I always make sand castles when we go to the beach and this made me think of them.

Happy Holidays!
Betty Lou

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2 posted 2002-12-19 03:45 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I too love going to the beach and making adobes in the sand and imagining they are like palaces with golden streets where I find loves ultimate sactuary! (sigh) You always build so beautifully, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2002-12-20 12:44 PM


Vivian,

Very creative writing.... and full of sweet dreams. Enjoyed reading very much and may you also receive a "Happy Season Greeting" from Me.  Your poet friend,

-Bob

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4 posted 2002-12-20 04:49 PM


I love this.  "When the night is in his nap."  What a unique way of expressing it.  Merry Christmas to you dear Eliza.  Love, Joyce
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