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GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

0 posted 2002-12-03 09:09 AM

Everlasting everlasting
Yet life intrudes that peace.
Devastated by the intrusion,
Oh grip of life release.

Everlasting everlasting
Continuing abroad
Bewildered by a world unraveled
Deceived with hate and fraud.

Everlasting everlasting
Let peace consume the soul.
Submit to Him, who paid the price,
Honor He who paid the toll.

Everlasting everlasting
Where will your future be?
Refuse and suffer in His wrath,
Or let everlasting be with thee.
Blessings

GG

-And so it was that time stood still-

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-12-03 11:10 AM

(smiles) Oh Alyssa, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it! His love is everlasting and may your heart always sing with light, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-03-2002 11:11 AM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-12-03 01:17 PM

Alyssa~
Absolutely lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

LadySofia
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 238
FL., USA

3 posted 2002-12-03 09:54 PM

I think you are a true poet and your poem was very heartwarming to me.you truly have a gift for words.Congratulations!
From a friend, Lady Death

Madam, you have bereft me of all words —Shakespeare

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-12-04 01:02 AM

GG: I enjoyed your poem and it's message.
Nice work!

Betty Lou Hebert

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2002-12-07 02:13 PM

First, let me give you a big.....

W E L C O M E

And then, let me say that I believe this poem to be a sincere and heartfelt appeal on your part to your readers to make quality choices in this life that will affect their lives to come. Yes, let us always be aware of those areas which are "Everlasting". God bless and again Welcome.

-Bob

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2003-02-20 03:30 AM

Thank you, everyone.
Just looking back and realised in my entering I never said thank you to all your great replies and, I thought it was deserved!
So, though you'll probably never read this, I thank you each deeply for the welcome you've given me

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2003-02-25 10:02 AM

I seem to have missed this poem first time around. Very nice. I hope you return. Joyce

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

8 posted 2003-02-25 10:08 AM

Me too Joyce so add my words of praise for this piece.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

9 posted 2003-02-26 01:32 AM

Joyce and Spirit,
thank you both very much, I'm honored

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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