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"I need this" |
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Alpha_Omega Junior Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 23 |
I hear the screams of a hollowed night Distantly growing every breath Shadow's seem to haunt every moment Each moment is tainted fury Glowing into infinite obscurity A fall of leaves crimsons the autumn A glance of sun leaves the spring-time song Trapped in burial grave, so close, so far Yet, Im so far from this pure serinity I am so pleasured but I need you to complete me |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Structurally, very well formatted prose here... Obviously, you are a very talented writer!!!  A bit melancholy, I felt at the beginning of my read here, but then the melancholy punctuated very nicely with the ending.... We do have needs for our "pure serenity." Good job and I do hope that you will be returning to share more of your talent with us. God bless.-Bob |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless you, sweet friend, just always follow your heart and you will find this serenity, I know it from the bottom of my heart! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shne upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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