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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-11-22 12:39 PM


Who can say East wind come too early?
Who can tell the sour apple is corrupt?
Sometimes a beginning is an end;
Sometimes dead sea sees sunshine.
Sour, it may seem to you,
Sweet, it is to ants and mice.
No one knows the pain of apple...beside herself.
No one knows the fate of the sea...
So when the birds sing
They don't pretend they know the wind.
Wind, herself, has her own story.
And when autumn comes,
It's not good or bad.
It's just another season changes.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2002-11-22 01:31 PM


I like that you give nature her perspective on this.  Your poem here is .................(uhm)  is a matter of perspective.  I say, "It's gooooood!!!"   Smiles and God bless.

-Bob

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2 posted 2002-11-22 02:43 PM




(smiles) Oh Eliza, this is wonderful, sweet friend, autumn is just a time to re-gather strength and faith and hold the light deep down in your heart to keep yourself warm through the winter! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2002-11-23 12:25 PM


Eliza:  I enjoyed your poem about accepting things as they are and for what they are! Very good.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-11-25 04:43 PM


To all things give their due.  This you have done wonderfully well.  Joyce
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