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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-10-28 10:23 AM


    
Here I am Lord
standing at the edge,
and the wall between
you and me
seems big.
Do you see me Lord?
I see you,
but the mountain
overwhelms me,
and I am afraid.
If I fall,
will you catch me?
I heard a very old story,
that you promise
to hold our hand,
always.
Because I need you,
I will trust you,
and fall into your arms.

BloomingRose


[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (10-28-2002 10:26 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-10-28 10:50 AM


A lovely story of simple faith and a pretty picture.  Joyce
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2002-10-28 12:53 PM


Wow!!! Now, that's a window with a view....

No better place to fall my friend tnan into the arms of a loving and most caring Savior.

Beautiful words of self expression here. Enjoyed reading your poem very much.

-Bob

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3 posted 2002-10-28 03:10 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, he loves all and He will always be there with arms wide open whenever you fall and catch you as He will guide you always with the spirit of love! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-10-28 10:41 PM


BloomingRose~
Such a comforting piece~
He is always there~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-10-29 08:24 AM


Now this is just lovely and the message of faith conveyed is just as lovely.  Well done, thank you for sharing.
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2006-05-26 09:22 AM


BloomingRose~
Sweet and lovely lady .. hoping you come "home" for a poetic visit~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2006-05-28 03:01 PM


Marge has been browsing again but this is worth a second time around and hopefully Blooming Rose will return.  Joyce.  
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