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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-10-23 05:47 AM


I remember the smell of chalk--
the contrast of white print
on green--
forest green to be exact--
it seemed to amplify the "word."

"What is that you want to be?"
The nun turned and wrote with jiggling arm.
I watched in fascination,
wondering, if she, in heat,
beneath the robe?
wore drause...

"WHAT I WILL BE..."
she wrote, neatly,
as I sat just there--squat in dread.
"When you grow up"
she asked of us,
"what is that you'll do?"

I sat there as she chose each one--
she had a method--a-b-c...
I heard each answer kissing "tush"--
an nun, a priest,
and fireman--
so altruistic of us kids...

When she finally got to me,
an "H" behind the "G"--
I clenched regret
and I announced:

"I want to be a prophet--
because they seem
to know--so well."

*    *     *

The silences foreshadowed dread.

Forever? I was marked.

But I will walk the coals of hell--

to kneel before the face of God

and Goddess--

in creation's dance--

amazed

in witness of my birth.

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-23-2002 05:49 AM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-10-23 12:41 PM


Built from the fire of understanding.
People just don't want to know well, sometimes.

Their loss.
Yr gain.

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2002-10-23 12:51 PM


serenity blaze,

You join a handsome group of Bible characters my friend.... Miriam, Deborah, Anna, and of course the four virgin daughters of Philip.... (Big Smiles!!!) All were prophetesses.

I loved the vision of your play by play experience here following the actions of your religious enlightening.... Very good!!!   I'm glad you held your ground....  and I say, "You go for it girl!!!"

-Bob

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3 posted 2002-10-23 02:20 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love the determination of your voice, sweet friend, like Robert said all those characters were prophets and even deep down we can all be prophets with poetic pens and see beyond the realms of our own world and into the otherside where much more meets the minds eye! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-26 11:34 PM


The silences foreshadowed dread.

Forever? I was marked.

But I will walk the coals of hell--

to kneel before the face of God

and Goddess--

in creation's dance--

amazed

in witness of my birth.


A very powerful write Karen.  Well done.

Justbleu
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5 posted 2003-04-23 11:59 PM


This is good.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2003-04-24 09:21 PM


I wondered how I could have missed this gem, but I see it was posted in 2002.
Wonderful work.  Joyce

edh
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7 posted 2003-04-25 01:12 PM


Nice job Blaze.

Sometimes when I think back and remember all those questions we got asked by teachers.

"What do you want to be"

How about if we just answered.  I am.  I am.  

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8 posted 2003-04-25 02:47 PM


And THIS is why I love you m'friend.

         

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2003-04-25 10:32 PM


wow...dis is one o dem I fergot...

sheesh, and I'm scratching my head here, as I can't even find the meter I was playing with to read it to MYSELF...and? grin...you spiritual folk are a patient bunch...

thanks much for reading...hugs to all!!!


Musicmaker1969
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10 posted 2003-04-25 10:55 PM


Very powerful and very well written.  Hope to read more of yours.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Welna
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11 posted 2003-05-06 03:25 PM



face smiling now....

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