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Keith Morgan
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0 posted 2002-10-22 07:35 PM


My Angel
Where is my Angel?
The one sworn to look over me.
My pain is beyond pain, It is more like a tickle;  
A constant stringing of my heart, taut with anguish.  
My prayer's to the Lord have long since ended;
The past has been a wise teacher.

True, my words are intoxicated;  
A drink of inebriation has given my pen courage,
But honesty comes from clearness,
And unconsciousness is pure truth.
My verbal penmanship has an invisible hand,
Expressing the voice of a ghost
Who reaches out for hope.

Where is my Angel?  
The one sworn to look over me;  
Tears I cry no more,
My ducts dry as the dessert plains.  
Let the Heaven's dream of passion,
Forgiving me for my sins,
So my sweet Angel of the Light,
Can deliver me from myself.


Keith Marcel

Write from the soul and the words will flow

© Copyright 2002 Keith M. Morgan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-22 08:06 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Keith, this is wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, know He loves all and you have an angel who is constantly guiding you always and placing a halo of guidance over your head! (sigh) This is touching, sweet firend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Keith, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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2 posted 2002-10-23 12:39 PM


I'm not the best person with critiques and all, but I can relate to your words, heartfelt indeed..

Consider yourself fuzzed

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2002-10-23 02:24 PM


Keith,

Yes, the world is full of angels of light and encouragement and also angels of darkness and discouragement.... Glad to read that you are seeking to hear the right voices and make the right choices in your life.  I've been through dark times also my friend and just knowing that there are forces beyond us is of great comfort my friend.  Good write and I agree and believe also that angels are always near.

-Bob

Kouranis
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4 posted 2002-10-24 02:24 PM


Beautiful work. I really felt it.  

"We are those who never sleep, we are those who always dream. Follow the heart."

[This message has been edited by Kouranis (10-24-2002 02:28 PM).]

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-10-26 11:31 PM


Yes I believe there are angels watching over.  Lovely write.
Justbleu
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6 posted 2003-02-28 08:27 PM


This is good....I very much enjoyed the read!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


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7 posted 2003-02-28 09:30 PM


I hope you have found your angel by now.  Joyce
Poet4Christ
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8 posted 2003-02-28 10:09 PM


Keith -
Be calmed in knowing that your angels are always with you.  I find it so interesting how so many of us inspirational poets find a similiar fascination with angels.  I believe there is a whole parralel dimension of angels out there, communicating with each other and with us in so many ways. It is comforting to know we are not alone on this earth.  Keith, it seems you are going through tough times, or at least you were when you wrote this poem.  Trust in his wisdome and his will and you will find peace, a peace that very well might be delivered by one of these angels.  I wonder how hard it would be for a group of us to get together and publish a book of poems on angels.  Just a thought..
Good work on the poem, heart felt and honest.
Thank you and God bless you - Tim

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