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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-12-15 10:38 PM

My love, my hands grasp the air of your shadow
as this heart silently beats in retreat, in search of
that which once graced my eyes as the heavens
above nodded approvingly of you.

My love, sands sift through these fingers, as my
fleeting grasp sifts the Sahara of my soul, a
thirst overwhelming, my lips in need of
your lips.

I have waited months to hear the sigh return
to my ears. A sound so heavenly, such a
blissful sharing of passion. As candles burn
the ache of you in the flicker.

I shall await, I shall not walk another step
as long as my empty arms feel the void of
our love, the void of oneness.

My love, I await....till time is no more
and the last glimmer of a star becomes
nothing more than the darkness of
night without you...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (12-15-2002 10:52 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-12-15 10:45 PM

Barry - love waits for one of your soft tender words...

BC

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-12-15 10:47 PM

Oh, my gawd! As I read these words of impassioned love, I stopped breathing and my heart started beating like a trip hammer!

~ I'm still shaking.. ... ....... .. . ....

EA

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-12-15 10:47 PM

Thanx BC, yanno I have to flex my pen
from time to time...gotta keep you on your
toes!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-12-15 10:48 PM

Linda...should I call EMS....or just send
ya one of my knights? Your call... Just
let me know...

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-12-15 11:02 PM

Barry

I hear you...the yearning is impassioned! Beautiful!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-12-15 11:06 PM

Whomever you send my way, please may he not be so handsome that he puts my heart into an even higher state of overdrive! lol

~ Thanx for your concern! --but then again, your writing was the cause of my tachycardia!

EA

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2002-12-15 11:21 PM

Barry,

Oh my, oh my, oh my........

"As candles burn the ache of you
in the flicker"

OMG.....You simply keep outwriting yourself....this is special....

Enjoyed a great deal.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

8 posted 2002-12-15 11:48 PM

Much enjoyed the passion. Thank you.

etoodog

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-12-15 11:54 PM

I wish I felt well enough to enjoy all of this passion, Barry....
*sigh*

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2002-12-15 11:58 PM

thirst overwhelming, my lips in need of
your lips.

Not to single out one line but this just speaks volumes. Every word is superb thank you

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

11 posted 2002-12-16 01:34 AM

Well...this is too dang much for lil' OLE me tonight...
Gawd, somebody help him!

(and help me while your at it!

aloha

,
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (12-16-2002 05:48 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2002-12-16 01:59 AM

Barry, if you keep writing these passionate poems, you're going to send all the replies of us (women) into the Adult Forum.......
(this sounds just like the things Gary says to me.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2002-12-16 02:47 AM

awwww, I hope it comes soon for you!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

14 posted 2002-12-16 06:01 PM

This is just beautiful...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2002-12-17 10:28 PM

Fantastic writing Magnus...James

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