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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-12-15 10:47 AM


In the cold, cold night
I feel you very near
With your arms around me
showing love so clear
The warmth from your body
lying next to mine
You're holding me real close
it certainly does feel fine
Your arms are strong, yet gentle
as you are holding me
Making me feel safe
where no harm will ever be
Your touch is oh, so tender
as you caress me, dear
With your fingertips
lightly touching everywhere
You're whispering your love
without uttering a word
With touches speaking loudly
and very plainly heard

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-15-2002 10:48 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-12-15 11:02 AM


That is the most precious feeling in the world. knowing you are loved and respected without a single word being spoken. you're always able to put such beautiful things into words, whereas i have difficulty, so its so lovely when you often write what i'm feeling! u can read my mind!you're a special lady, with a special man to match.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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2 posted 2002-12-15 11:07 AM


You're whispering your love
without uttering a word
With touches speaking loudly
and very plainly heard


Lovely words Ethel,love this line especially and ironically I'm about to post a similar poem but not one quite as sweet. I guess the minds of us romantics are always linked

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-15-2002 11:10 AM).]

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3 posted 2002-12-15 11:19 AM


Gemma, thank you so much. It means a lot to me to know that the kind of love that my Love and I share is also known by others. It's so very special that I can't seem to keep it all inside. Sometimes, I'm afraid that you sweet people here may get tired of reading my love poems, because I write them so often. It's really nice to know that they are enjoyed. Thank you so much for your sweet comments.    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2002-12-15 11:21 AM


Raph, thank you very much for your sweet reply. I really appreciate it. Yep, us romantics think a lot alike, don't we? I'm going right now to find your poem.    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2002-12-15 11:42 AM


Ethel sometimes the words are just not needed are they?  This is just lovely!
Hugs and peace to you.  Thank you for sharing your lovely heart.  

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6 posted 2002-12-15 11:48 AM


Donna, no, sometimes words aren't needed........    

Thank you, sweet lady , for your reply.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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7 posted 2002-12-15 03:09 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, this is sooooooooo beautiful, and I long for the day when I can finally hug Joanna and kiss her and also feel that special feeling of unconditional happiness! (kiss on cheek) I wish you and Gary the biggest smiles of love ever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

P.S: I wrote a very special poem for Joanna that I re-posted that is also a challenge I would be so happy if you tried! You can find the poem/challenge here, yay!
/pip/Forum74/HTML/003515.html


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-12-15 03:31 PM



Ethel, how wonderful for those women who do not have a 'significant other' in their lives, if your Gary could be cloned! hehe!

~ I'm happy for you, dear one!

Linda

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9 posted 2002-12-15 03:36 PM


Noah, I went to the poem and as I told you there, I'll  TRY  to meet your challenge, though I know I could never come near the way you write. But, if I wrote just like you, I wouldn't be me!  HeeHee!!
Seriously, thank you for your sweet comments.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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10 posted 2002-12-15 03:37 PM


Linda, that's true... HaHa!!   He sure is everything in a man I've always wanted...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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11 posted 2002-12-15 05:29 PM


garysgirl - nice touch, and tender...

BC

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12 posted 2002-12-16 12:20 PM


Thank you, Bill........  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Robert Adamson
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13 posted 2002-12-16 02:44 AM


So sweet! I think someday you will be rewarded plenty. Good and Plenty... good and plenty... Do you rem that? Thank you.


etoodog

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14 posted 2002-12-16 02:53 AM


you write of love so well, I could never even begin to imagine what that's like, not love like that...
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