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GG
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0 posted 12-15-2002 01:25 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GG


Twilight has fallen, the dust revealed.
In the moonlit sky a love is sealed.
The moon still shines to light the place
Where once I felt a warm embrace.

The stars held up, by Godís own hand
Is the only comfort I now understand.
I miss the past; the memories fade.
I feel fear and doubt, resentment and rage.

The loving hands, working so hard,
Long into the night.. My soulís now scarred.
The moonlit sky, it shines so bright,
But thereís only reason for mourning tonight.

The moonlit sky it shines with might
Its late now and but I feel alright.
I have memories from the light shown,
Iíll sleep tight; Iím safe at home.


(this I wrote about two years ago, so I was only thirteen)

- And so it was that time stood still -

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1 posted 12-15-2002 03:39 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Alyssa, this is a beautifully written poem. And you were onlu thirteen years old??? Simply amazing, the talent that you have.  I really enjoyed this and look forward to seeing much more of your work. Thank you for sharing.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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2 posted 12-15-2002 03:45 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

13 years old? Gosh, we'l give three more years and you'll be publishing!
Keep writing. It;s wonderful!
Liz
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3 posted 12-15-2002 04:00 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

Thank you both!
I believe the best poems are written when the deepest emotions are felt, thats how I got anything written down that some may even describle slightly 'ok' at that age.

Ah how I thank that teacher whom forced us to write, and I hated it so much then!

Always, GG

- And so it was that time stood still -

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4 posted 12-15-2002 04:04 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

wow! This is quite impressive from a mind, heart, and soul that is only 13 years old...
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5 posted 05-20-2004 08:30 PM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

Dix,
I can't believe that way back when (two years ago new, wow!) I never replied to you! Well here's a thanks to you


Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

 
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