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Mysteria
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0 posted 2002-12-14 01:52 PM




Play Oh Holy Night

~* The Little Tin Tree *~


I met a little girl on the East side of Vancouver,
Holding a tin can and inside was a candle so bright,
I asked her why she was out by herself so late,
She said, “I had to find a Christmas tree for tonight.”

She wanted to surprise her Mother, and Brother,
And was so excited about the can she held in her hand.
Someone had thrown the candle out of a window,
And she was standing right where it did land.

She was not supposed to play with matches,
So she got someone to light the candle for her,
She said, besides her tree would last longer
Than any old dumb, Douglas fir.

I asked could I come meet her Mom and Brother,
Surprisingly she took hold of my hand real tight,
We then walked somewhere I would never go,
Especially in downtown Vancouver at night.

My heart broke when I saw where she took me,
For they lived in an alley so dark and cold,
I got down to talk to her Mother, who told me,
Her daughter had a heart of the purest gold.

I agreed with her and asked carefully,
Was there anything that I could do?
I offered her money for food, or presents,
I promised they would all be brand new.

I was shocked at what I heard next.
She said, “Really we are all alright”,
We have shelter at the Mission over there,
And a warm bed and food for tonight.

Then she looked at me again and said,
“Wait, there is something I could ask you.
Do you think you could find an artificial Christmas tree?
I’d like to surprise Marie, anything would do.”

“Of course”, I said “I will be back this evening”.
I told her if I missed them, I wished them the very best.
I would bring a tiny tree for Marie, her and David,
Making a Christmas for them was now my quest.

I phoned the Gospel Mission and got the dinner time,
Quickly, got some of my neighbours on deck to assist.
We arrived at the alley with presents and tree,
I don’t think there was one thing we missed!

I was so proud of my neighbours for helping,
As they donated gifts from under their tree,
That told me a lot of their character,
To stop on Christmas Eve just to help me.

I hid and waited for them to come home,
And also to make sure nothing was taken,
And to this day I will never forget Marie’s face,
At her sight of the tree, and the presents shaken!

Oh, I know it was only one Christmas,
And only one family we helped out that day,
But it has stuck with me how fortunate I am,
And that feeling will never, ever go away.



~* This was a true story *~

         
Season's Greetings
    from my home in Canada to yours!

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1 posted 2002-12-14 05:39 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I knew from the start this was a true story as you have a true golden heart and your loving heart reaches out to so many as you and your neighbors have given this family a special Christmas they'll never forget! (wipes tears) You are a true angel, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-12-14 06:10 PM


Oh what a lovely and giving person you are, Sharon
This is a beautiful story
  ~ many loving hugs from the Jewish Christmasmunk

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (12-14-2002 06:13 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-12-14 06:17 PM


Noah, Noah, Noah, some day I have to come there and squeeze you to bits you leave the sweetest comments.

Lyra!  Honey so good to see you scampering about in here, Happy Hanukah to you and David sweetie.

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4 posted 2002-12-14 07:33 PM



Sharon,

An uplifting, beautiful story.
Am so glad it's true! Wonderful,
am glad you shared it here.

Happy Holidays to you and yours,

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2002-12-14 09:45 PM


Marie and her family must have been thrilled. You are an angel Sharon.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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6 posted 2002-12-15 04:26 AM


oh geez this is a tear-jerker...or maybe it's just my mood tonight, this was heartful...
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7 posted 2002-12-15 09:11 AM


It may have been only one time, one Christmas, but the spirit of this lives on, and you have shared the best with us, so that we might pass it on.

Hugs, my friend...

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8 posted 2002-12-15 10:28 AM


Oh, Sharon, this is beautiful beyond words. Not only the poem, but the wonderful story behind it. If each one of us would have such a compassionate heart as you and help one little child, just think of how many more happy little faces would be seen.
Thank you do much for sharing this with us....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2002-12-15 11:43 AM


Sharon

I think you are an angel, this touched me with your wings.  

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10 posted 2002-12-15 12:27 PM


Sharon this is beautiful.  You are an angel for the world to be blessed with.  HUGS
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11 posted 2002-12-15 12:37 PM


Sharon, and this perfectly illustrates the true meaning of Christmas. I hope you will post this every year!

~ God bless your generous and loving heart

Linda

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12 posted 2002-12-15 12:50 PM


Dear compassionate poetess

This is a beautiful story, heartwarming and inspirational. A message of the meaning of love, unconditional and pure, one heart toi another, a meeting of the souls. I enjoyed reading this so much.

Loved this
Liz

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13 posted 2002-12-15 01:09 PM


Nan knows how this story ended in truth, so I will share it with you all as well.  This woman got proper housing this year, job training, babysitting, and is back in the work force in one year.  So with a little help changes do happen.  I suppose she will be looking to help someone else this year, and I wouldn't at all be surprised if she shows up at Harbour House to help out this year herself.  Glad you enjoyed this story of love.  It is one that warms my heart too. Thank you all.

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-15-2002 01:10 PM).]

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14 posted 2002-12-15 08:38 PM


A true story indeed... and one of your best, as far as I'm concerned... I hope you post it every year...

I guess it's time for me to take some of that Xmas poetry out of storage too...

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15 posted 2002-12-15 08:53 PM


Very beautiful Sharon...
Appreciate the repost...it's an annual classic.
Season's greetings to you and yours.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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16 posted 2002-12-15 09:20 PM


Oh, Sharon this is so touching and what a wonderful gift from your heart to a family down on their luck.

God Bless you and your neighbors for bringing joy and sunshine to a little girl's face.

Hugs and many blessings to you and your family.  Love, Marti

Let our love circle the world and
bring Peace to all this Holiday Season.

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17 posted 2002-12-15 09:52 PM


~* Happy Holidays Everyone *~
Oh my we have a new forum now all the Christmas poetry is in the wrong one but look at the number of the forum (24) as in Christmas Eve?  I believe that anyway

         
Season's Greetings
    from my home in Canada to yours!

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