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Rusty
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since 2002-12-14
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0 posted 2002-12-14 10:57 AM



Me and my dear sweet wife
saved our money all our life.
We were going to invest it all
for our business in the mall.

Worked for morn to setting sun
but it was over before it begun.
Our chance at entreprenurialship
went quickly into receivership.

Now we're broke, we went bust.
Retirement now lays in the dust.
We have suffered heartache
for making such a big mistake.

You won't make much money at
a Nudist Colony Laundromat

© Copyright 2002 Rusty - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-14 10:58 AM


LOL! WELCOME! Perhaps if you put it in Barrow, Alaska?
regards2you
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2 posted 2002-12-14 11:07 AM



Rusty:  ~WELCOME TO PASSIONS~


This is creative and cute. Glad you salvaged your sense of humor.  Enjoyed.


Warm regards, and happy holidays to you and yours.  Pat  


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (12-14-2002 11:09 AM).]

arthur
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england
3 posted 2002-12-14 11:34 AM


perhaps if you had specialised in fig leafs
arthur

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
4 posted 2002-12-14 11:46 AM


I guess that would depend on the clients...

Welcome, and stay a while...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-12-14 11:53 AM




LOL! No, you can't, though perhaps it may feel you have a lot more freedom! LOL! (smiles) This is a creative debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Rusty, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rusty, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2002-12-14 11:54 AM


Rusty, welcome to Passions! You really had me going there! I went from being near tears for your misfortune, to near p... my panties ! LOL You little rascallion!

~ sending you warm, welcoming hugs

Earth Angel

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2002-12-14 12:04 PM



Had to come back for another laugh.
Please post more things like this.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-12-14 12:15 PM


*smiling here*
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very much enjoyed your humorous first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15
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land of flora and fauna
9 posted 2002-12-14 01:57 PM


soooooo, let me guess--going into the financial consulting business now are you??..hehe..enjoyed, so glad you left a smile!!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2002-12-14 05:50 PM


it sure would be fun to go sit in there awhile though, even if I didn't have clothes to wash...lol
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