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My Shadow (Senryu)
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My Shadow (Senryu) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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I drag my shadow which grows longer with each year or does it drag me? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good question... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i also wonder if we do or dont have control of our lives, cant quite figure it all out |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal A little of both, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
There you go, draggin my brain again onto a new thought path!  This is great! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmm! Let me think on this one... I believe that shadows get longer as the sun sets in the horizon. I suppose you could also apply that premise to ourselves as we age. As for your question of whether you are dragging your shadow or being dragged by it, I believe it depends on which way you are facing! ~ hugs for another gem! EA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fantastic look from two perspectives...it might depend on the day and one's energy level and internal spirit...perhaps both could be the case Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks passing not an easy one to answer either Inked I'm not sure either thus the poem. a litle free will a little devine intervention perhaps..no idea Seymour agreed, glad u liked it Kacy  you're a gem. EA "that premise to ourselves as we age" is exactly what I was after, as for the question who knows.. VAS good points it does depend on the day doesn't it. thanks everybody for your thoughts [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-14-2002 11:59 AM).] |
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