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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2002-12-13 07:35 PM

Something

When these miles finally melt
and time brakes seconds down
into clarity,
something is summoned -
an image, us on the sand,
against the beachhead,
waves crashing around us
and your eyes are the colour
of the sea.

Light falls in setting hues,
the sun slips in
and out
from behind
clouds.

Home is there,
finding me giddy,
all dreams wrapped up
in layers of you.

© 2002 Core

[This message has been edited by Corinne (12-13-2002 07:41 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-12-13 07:38 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Corinne, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! I imagined cottonpcandy clouds and Jolly-Rancher rainbows reading this, yay! (kiss on cheek) May these beautiful feelings always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-13 07:42 PM

I get giddy too, but can't pinpoint what makes me that way...oh well, nice write

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2002-12-13 07:42 PM

Oh my but I have missed reading your poetry, and I wish you could see the smile I have from reading this one, it's lovely.

Season's Greetings
from my home in Canada to yours!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2002-12-13 11:03 PM

isnt it great to be lost in love?
aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh
so heavenly..............

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-12-14 02:40 AM

Corinne,

This is both beautiful and tender.
Enjoyed.
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Diane Coway
Member

since 2002-08-01

Posts 61
USA

6 posted 2002-12-14 02:50 AM

Cor,,,sounds that you are delightfully happy.
I am glad for you. Once again, a nice read.
Red

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

7 posted 2002-12-14 11:13 AM

Thank you all for your inspirational comments!

Cor

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