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0 posted 2002-12-13 05:46 PM


To Give
~ By Sue ~

To give of oneself
Is the greatest gift of all
Showing your concern
For how one person might feel
Can help a broken heart heal

12-13-02




© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-13 05:47 PM


yes.... nicely said and done...

sometimes when we think we have nothing else to give..is when we need to give the most.

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2 posted 2002-12-13 05:54 PM


Nicely written, food for thought.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

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3 posted 2002-12-13 09:59 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very true, sweet friend, and know we are always here for you when you need a shoulder to lean on! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-12-13 10:36 PM


SmartChick


   ~Absolutely~
Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2002-12-13 11:04 PM


Excellent Sue!
Very well done..
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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