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Open Poetry #23

Touched

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

0 posted 2002-12-13 05:21 PM

Touched by the feelings behind the words.
By the emotions that I have felt and heard.
My pen once again is carried away.
Somtimes its hard to find the words to say.

The anger....depression...love....pain.
Forever on my soul will leave there stain.
I'm better for being touched by all.
With prayer on my lips till god does call.

Thank you for sharing and caring so much.
I have been truly blessed by your touch.
Till we me in the here after.
I hope life feels you with only laughter.

Though I know hard times will come,
You can share it with someone.
To lighten your load, and free your soul.
So this world takes less of a toll.

With its....anger....depression...love....pain.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-12-13 05:23 PM

an interesting read... and sensitive thoughts that carry depth..

I enjoyed

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 2002-12-13 05:24 PM

Very deep well done write....

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

3 posted 2002-12-13 05:35 PM

Hope your not giving up on yourself.
Your message is a strong emotional piece...you did the write well.
~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

4 posted 2002-12-13 05:44 PM

Thx, Not giving up that would be to easy.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

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