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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-12-13 05:11 PM




Are words enough to tell you what I feel
Sometimes I realize you are not real
You're fantasy like in the dreams of sleep
But you're embedded in my heart real deep

You are the friend who knows of all my pain
You are the one who keeps me rather sane
And still I know you never will be seen
By those who are surrounding me I mean

You're living in my head all day and night
And when I'm lonely you will hold me tight
You will be there whenever I'm in need
But...you're a dream, a fantasy indeed

You've never let me down, as I recall
Imaginary friends, we have them all

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

© Copyright 2002 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-13 05:16 PM


Titia... yes i think we all have some sort of imaginary friend we talk to inside..

enjoyed your poem!

SmartChick
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2 posted 2002-12-13 05:56 PM


Hi there Titia. I really like this.
Kethry
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3 posted 2002-12-13 06:11 PM


Yep me too, I talk to my friends all the time it's when my friends talk back, I worry.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-12-13 09:21 PM


O' poo, I don't have one of these! Hmmm...I wonder if Santa will bring me one for Christmas?

I loved this Titia, very creative and imaginative!

Hugs, Marti

Let our love circle the world and
bring Peace to all this Holiday Season.

Martie
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5 posted 2002-12-13 09:31 PM


Titia

My daughter had two imaginary friends...I always wished that they were my friends too.  Loved this!

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6 posted 2002-12-13 09:33 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I love making imaginary friends, like I have one who is a baby bluebird who always sits on my shoulder and speaks with happiness and sympathy! (giggles) This is so adorable, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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7 posted 2002-12-14 03:09 AM


I had one, she left
Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2002-12-14 04:35 AM



Thanks for your replies.
I never had an imaginary friend, but I could imagine what it would be like if I had one.
Sometimes they can be of great comfort I suppose.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Diane Coway
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9 posted 2002-12-14 11:39 AM


Hi Titia,
I loved reading your poem, as it has put me in deep thought. Imaginary friends can be nice.  I had several...but mine were me.  I mean they were not imaginary.  It was a long hard journey to intergrate and know who I actually am, as I got lost in a sea of multiple personalities.  
Now I am me...the real me. On the hard days, but not often there are two that I give permission to come and stand with me.
I must be cautious when I do this, for I will not allow myself to get lost agian.  Therefore, one can only stand beside me, and I must always know I am out and I know who I am.  For life is too beautiful not to know who one really is...I love the real me.
I love them too though, for they were my protectors.  Now, I can protect me on my own terms.  
Take care, and enjoy.
Hugs,
Coway

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10 posted 2002-12-14 11:44 AM


Titia, dear heart! When we finally do manage to get together for our chit chat vis a vis, we can introduce our imaginary friends to each other and have a wonderful tea party together!

~ warm happy holiday hugs
Linda

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-12-15 01:51 AM


This is such a sweet poem, Titia...
I used to have an imaginary friend when I was a little girl....  and whenever my parents would find out that I got into some sort of mischief... I always blamed it on her and they thought it was so funny that they sometimes didn't even punish me for it.  It was a very useful device and was probably the beginning of my poetry writing...
This is the same friend that drew pictures on the walls and re-arranged my mother's pantry with all of the food in size places....
Thanks for the write
~ imaginary chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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