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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-12-13 09:35 AM



The silence that enfolds around,
soft embrace of

emptiness

I feel the space you filled
now void of your essence
encompassing in loneliness
as love has left with you...

I'm here, myself, and fantasy
lacking in it's touch
missing all the pleasure
{{{still reeling in the rush}}}

I caress the soft of me
touch the heat
of want
as you would do
a sensuous slide of hand across skin
and the missing again
is a game
I can only play
after the light of day
in darkened room
fantasies on loom
I weave a touch in thought
to soothe
to sate
for naught
for still I come up wanting
your hand upon my flesh.

WhiteRose

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-12-13 09:39 AM


I know this feeling

this was very good!!
M

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2002-12-13 09:44 AM


nicely done... one can feel the desire in this..desire for more than empty...
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2002-12-13 09:52 AM


I loved the last two lines.....there's more than one meaning there! Great write!! ~~S~~

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
4 posted 2002-12-13 02:45 PM


very sensuous and suggestive, but nice
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2002-12-13 03:32 PM


This leaves an echo in my heart...
Nicely done. ThisDiamond

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2002-12-13 04:11 PM


Wanting the touch...I do understand this all too well.
CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
7 posted 2002-12-13 11:10 PM


I've missed reading you lately. This is superbly expressed ,but oh so sad too.
I wish you happiness and peace
be blessed< Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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