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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2002-12-13 09:22 AM




It's a cold winter day
with a hot cup of tea
Thoughts swirling around
of my man and me...

A break by the fire
The chores can all wait
A weekend for two
to anticipate...

He's off in the morn
A kiss, then alone
this lover, this wife
this keeper of home...

Our home is our castle
Our love-nest for two
But it's never complete
'til the door he walks through...

Then laughter and music
soon fill up the space
Just thinking of that
puts a smile on this face!

I must stop my dreaming
Chores beckon, you see
And soon comes the weekend
for my man and me...




Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    



[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (12-13-2002 09:36 AM).]

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-12-13 09:28 AM


Oh how I know this feeling. The only thing is, when my man comes home, the only thing he fills the house with is his mess.

But, it is a welcome sight all the same.

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2002-12-13 09:43 AM


Oh WhiteRose...I think that's just part of life, eh?? I had a friend, who had lost her husband, once tell me that we don't realize how much we miss all those little things until they aren't there anymore. So, bring on all that married life has to offer!!!! And enjoy!!! (Thank you so much for reading, my friend!!)

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2002-12-13 11:29 AM


Hi Sunny!
Looks to me as if things are cheery and bright for you. Keep playing your favorite songs together. I enjoyed the upbeat feel to this.   

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-12-13 11:35 AM


Sunnyone
A lovely write, enjoyed.

Salty
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Texas
5 posted 2002-12-13 12:00 PM


Such an uplifting write this is....Good on U

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

kayjay
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6 posted 2002-12-13 12:08 PM


This is a great tribute...to you who care so much ...and to him who is obviously worth it.  Very uplifting.  Thank you.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

garysgirl
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7 posted 2002-12-13 12:13 PM


Your friend told you right, Sunny. You don't miss all the mess they make until they're not there to make it anymore....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-13-2002 12:14 PM).]

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-12-13 06:54 PM


Sunnyone - I wish you the very best, and I'm glad that you are happy...

BC

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9 posted 2002-12-13 08:22 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Sunnyone, I hope you have the most gorgrous weekend, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-12-13 09:34 PM


I'm so glad to see you posting, Sunny.  Sounds like a lot of romance between that new husband and you.   *hugs*     

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Music Maker
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THE ORIGINAL !!!!
11 posted 2002-12-14 03:56 AM


A beautiful tribute to our love, thank you Darling!   Now get back to your housework and stop messing around on the puter all day while I am at work!!!   Love Ya.
Hubby John
(The Music Maker)  XXX

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