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crayola dreams

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inkedgoddess
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since 11-19-2002
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0 posted 12-13-2002 09:01 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for inkedgoddess


on its way
across the miles,
your present
wrapped and sealed,
with peace,love,health
and all that stuff,
and that famous
pink print of
my kiss, as always,

a box of 64,
to my artist lover,
that put down
his brushes,
for a while,
cant buy canvas,
costs too much,
he says,
too busy to paint,
he says,
busy working for the man,
he says,
trying to make his fortune,
he says,
so one day, he says
he'll gather his
paints and dreams
and sail off
to gaughins island

but now
your artists heart,
just sits
and gathers dust,
like souveneir shells
sitting on shelves,
waiting for their
sounds to be released
like many of us,
longing, to be heard,

open the box,
dear friend,
its a start,
draw me a rainbow
from vegas to jersey,
meet me in the middle roberto,
amid the black starlit night,
and toast the new year.......
i love you.......always
your dreamgirl
© Copyright 2002 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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1 posted 12-13-2002 09:13 AM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

Lovely belles lettres, hopefully it will inspire. Some beautiful paintings on oak panels and limewood survive from the early 1400's. Bon chance.
Sunnyone
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since 07-06-2000
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Staffordshire, England


2 posted 12-13-2002 09:17 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

'draw me a rainbow' is such a great line here!!!!  I hope your artist friend opens up his box of crayons, and sets himself free!!
~~S~~

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    

VAS
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since 11-16-2000
Posts 7440
Oregon


3 posted 12-13-2002 09:20 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

A powerful poem of want for blessings for someone loved.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 12-13-2002 09:20 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

lovely write... may the images you both create endure..
scorpio
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right...there


5 posted 12-13-2002 09:23 AM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

May your artist blend those 64 colours into one beautiful expression of his love for you!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Aenimal
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6 posted 12-13-2002 03:35 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Inked, ...every single word. goddamn
ThisDiamond
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since 02-22-2002
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7 posted 12-13-2002 03:39 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Very moving...hope also inspiring to it's intended receiver.  Was for me. ThisDiamond
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


8 posted 12-13-2002 06:53 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

inkedgoddess - you do write them well...

BC
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9 posted 12-13-2002 08:50 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yay, and may the whole 96-crayon selection color your dreams of love and make all these smiles come true for you both! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

inkedgoddess
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Ohio


10 posted 12-13-2002 11:00 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

96, mistletoe, oh now, i didnt know........

aenimal, when you metnioned about the painting, it just hit a chord, and like this
painter of mine, i hate to see talent on the sidelines, thats it.......like my son.......he is one gifted poet/puts my stuff to shame.........if he stops, writing, i just have  to kick his butt once in a while
gemjop
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11 posted 06-06-2004 02:44 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

This reminds me of someone.

wise words inked.
 
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