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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-13 09:01 AM



on its way
across the miles,
your present
wrapped and sealed,
with peace,love,health
and all that stuff,
and that famous
pink print of
my kiss, as always,

a box of 64,
to my artist lover,
that put down
his brushes,
for a while,
cant buy canvas,
costs too much,
he says,
too busy to paint,
he says,
busy working for the man,
he says,
trying to make his fortune,
he says,
so one day, he says
he'll gather his
paints and dreams
and sail off
to gaughins island

but now
your artists heart,
just sits
and gathers dust,
like souveneir shells
sitting on shelves,
waiting for their
sounds to be released
like many of us,
longing, to be heard,

open the box,
dear friend,
its a start,
draw me a rainbow
from vegas to jersey,
meet me in the middle roberto,
amid the black starlit night,
and toast the new year.......
i love you.......always
your dreamgirl

© Copyright 2002 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-12-13 09:13 AM


Lovely belles lettres, hopefully it will inspire. Some beautiful paintings on oak panels and limewood survive from the early 1400's. Bon chance.
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2002-12-13 09:17 AM


'draw me a rainbow' is such a great line here!!!!  I hope your artist friend opens up his box of crayons, and sets himself free!!
~~S~~

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2002-12-13 09:20 AM


A powerful poem of want for blessings for someone loved.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2002-12-13 09:20 AM


lovely write... may the images you both create endure..
scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
5 posted 2002-12-13 09:23 AM


May your artist blend those 64 colours into one beautiful expression of his love for you!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
6 posted 2002-12-13 03:35 PM


Inked, ...every single word. goddamn

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
7 posted 2002-12-13 03:39 PM


Very moving...hope also inspiring to it's intended receiver.  Was for me. ThisDiamond

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2002-12-13 06:53 PM


inkedgoddess - you do write them well...

BC

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-12-13 08:50 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yay, and may the whole 96-crayon selection color your dreams of love and make all these smiles come true for you both! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
10 posted 2002-12-13 11:00 PM


96, mistletoe, oh now, i didnt know........

aenimal, when you metnioned about the painting, it just hit a chord, and like this
painter of mine, i hate to see talent on the sidelines, thats it.......like my son.......he is one gifted poet/puts my stuff to shame.........if he stops, writing, i just have  to kick his butt once in a while

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
11 posted 2004-06-06 02:44 PM


This reminds me of someone.

wise words inked.

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