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Tempting Fate
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Tempting Fate |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I dressed in sheerness just for you, naked thoughts to tease your eye. But went to sleep in shades of gray and danced to slowness, dreaming "why". Leaning 'gainst the tall and strong, I'm blinded by the daze of you. And come the Winter of my life I'll dance the slow ones in full view. In silent rest I think You-thoughts, in pretense keeping moments hid. And model for you, thoughts I wear and walk the line of "once forbid". So tempting, fate and I seem crossed, overlapping between the lines. I trace the path to form a chain, connecting links to your confines. The fervor of, solicitude weighs itself in ecstasy, intoxicates and fills the void to reign upon this myst of me. I dressed this night for only you, with tender thoughts, my touch to be. Sheathed in darkness, clothed in want, I await, the "You for Me". M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-13-2002 12:13 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
WOW! M, That was awesome. You just amaze me girl. I'm thinking that is a keeper. Thank you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Really? and here I was struggling to make this one make sense to someone, anyone *s  M I haven't stayed up this late since the poet's meet a few months back. [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-13-2002 12:28 AM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Sue, was just keeping a friend company and a poem wanted "out"  hugss M |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I'm glad this poem wanted "out" for all of us to see.... Thank you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A charming write, very enjoyable. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Such a delicate dainty sounding piece. Lovely words Maureen Enjoyed the read ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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