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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-12-12 11:33 PM


The softest knock upon a winter's door.
One heart in search of two in explore.
The softest rap,  meant to one be woken.
Love born not cheaply,  softly spoken.

The eyes that stare beyond the light
into the snow falling on winter's night.
The sigh that is heard as a flake falls.
A whisper's sound,  of romance's calls.

I touch the pane,  to draw my heart
that you might see the crimson find.
I draw in words our romantic art.
We touch in dreams of slumber's mind.

You gave your love on freedom's wind
as hands did clasp in sensual bond.
Our bodies lithe,  in lover's blend
upon the touch of a faerie's wand.

I leave this place,  a physical home
to live a life within two dreams.
A place where both willingly roam
beneath our fall...our crystal streams.

Goodnite...Pleasant dreams...


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-12 11:42 PM


Ahhhhhh very romantic..*Swoon*
and a bit mysterious at the end..
I was glad to be the first reply tonight.
(was searchin' for Magnus earlier)
Aloha and goodnight dear poet
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Aenimal
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2 posted 2002-12-12 11:43 PM


A lovely dream may it come true for all
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3 posted 2002-12-12 11:44 PM


Soft as a fluffed pillow.  Good write and good night.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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4 posted 2002-12-12 11:45 PM


Barry

"I touch the pane,  to draw my heart
that you might see the crimson find.
I draw in words our romantic art.
We touch in dreams of slumber's mind."

Sweet dreams, dear man.  


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5 posted 2002-12-12 11:48 PM


Such a romantic, Barry. Thanks for sharing your poetry.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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6 posted 2002-12-13 01:12 AM


"You gave your love on freedom's wind
as hands did clasp in sensual bond.
Our bodies lithe,  in lover's blend
upon the touch of a faerie's wand."

Very, very nice Barry.


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7 posted 2002-12-13 05:39 AM




Just smiling here Barry. You do romance justice. Enjoyed.


Warm regards, Pat


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8 posted 2002-12-13 07:05 AM


lovely words to embrace in slumber--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2002-12-13 09:59 AM


When you write romance, there is a warmth unmistakable and deep.  May all your wishes come true my friend.  Honored to read you.
TD

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10 posted 2002-12-13 01:37 PM


Enchanting piece (peace).  A true pleasure read with justice done to form.  Thank you.
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11 posted 2002-12-13 02:41 PM


Ahh.."to sleep, per chance to dream" this is lovely Magnus. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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