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Sorrow |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sorrow I don’t want to let you go it is the space of one movement past fingertips an empty hallway where heartbeat stops and breath exist to be just an echo of sorrow I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A very forlorn write. Where ya been Helen? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - sorry to hear about sorrow... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, Everything okay? This bodes an actual experience. I hope not...but peace and love to you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, very well-written. I also hope it's not from something you've personally experienced. Thanks for sharing.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Deeply emotional and heartfelt. Thank you for purging a painful experience with us. raph |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Given the genuineness of your poetry, this too must be. Your emptiness is palpable. I'm sorry for your loss. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's a deep one |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ditto A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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