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Aenimal
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0 posted 12-12-2002 09:21 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aenimal

Down here on my knees
the words spill to the ground
libations to gods that never
seem to find the time to listen
as another year closes its
icy hands around my neck
300 and 65 alone again

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-12-2002 10:06 PM).]

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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...


1 posted 12-12-2002 09:38 PM       View Profile for MARK V SHELDON   Email MARK V SHELDON   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit MARK V SHELDON's Home Page   View IP for MARK V SHELDON

...sounds to me like it's a 180 that may be called for...?

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Aenimal
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2 posted 12-12-2002 10:09 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

A one eighty is always needed isn't it? Thanks for replying to a moment of self pity and loneliness..
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 12-12-2002 10:55 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

yes, those last 30 that we count can be the
cruelest of all

"i wish i had a river........i could skate
away on........." joni mitchell

also, start painting again
Aenimal
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4 posted 12-12-2002 11:54 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Thanks inked. Every second that ticks off is overbearing as the new year looms.
Sometimes I think I can barely endure writing , let alone painting. The brush still weighs heavy in my hand. Thanks for remembering and caring enough to say so though.
Always appreciate your replies

raph
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5 posted 12-13-2002 01:37 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

You aren't alone. You're here with us! And you can be here 365.
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6 posted 12-13-2002 02:24 AM       View Profile for paladin   Email paladin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paladin

Reminds me of the Beatle's song "Elenor Rigby".

paladin

....a knight without armor

Salty
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7 posted 12-13-2002 02:54 AM       View Profile for Salty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salty

You are not alone...and we are listening.
Come on back to the lounge and share a coke with us.  


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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Ethan Halo
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on the roof again


8 posted 12-13-2002 04:09 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

loneliness has such a bad rap.. i kinda like it...

yeah, it's gonna be one of those decembers again...i feel ya.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

Aenimal
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Thanks midnite

Paladin jesus I hope not, I don't want it to get to that level

Thank you Salty sweet words what's the 'lounge' or is was that figuratively?

Thanks Ethan hopefully the last of these decembers I've had enough




Aenimal
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10 posted 05-27-2004 10:14 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

words spill to ground
libations to gods that never
seem to find the time
                             to listen
as another closes its
hands around my neck
300 and 65 alone
                                  again
gemjop
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11 posted 06-06-2004 02:06 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

a good one I missed.

yeah, feeling like this a lot lately.
 
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