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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-12 09:08 PM



on fridays,
i bake cookies
off the family tree,
drink leftover wine,
and blast Metallica
with the windows open,

clean the house
up and down
in the nude,
and wonder,
hours later,
if the gardeners
caught a glimpse
of a hot,horny,housewife,
on the threshold of insanity

© Copyright 2002 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2002-12-12 09:11 PM


Goddamn inked...raw and powerful. Total courage only you could have written this.
Raph "Master of puppets"

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-12-2002 09:11 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2002-12-12 09:14 PM


thanks, a lot...........

many sides of this one woman

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

3 posted 2002-12-12 09:45 PM


And what of Sunday? Enjoyed the vision but turn down the sounds.
kayjay
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since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015
Oregon
4 posted 2002-12-12 09:57 PM


This is marvelous.  If I aim a telescope at a satellite, can I watch you from Oregon??  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2002-12-12 10:15 PM


inkedgoddess - when I was working in the garden there, I was wondering who that was nude running around the house, now I know...

BC

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-12-12 10:22 PM


smiling...

I feel like I just read a page out of my own journal.

One difference? I don't worry about anyone looking?

I tend to worry more if they DON'T.



enjoyed the show, m'friend.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2002-12-12 10:45 PM


no , i dont worry, maybe i got it discombobulated, or something like that.

no, im quite an exhibitsionist, tho a quiet one......

Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2002-12-13 09:33 AM


need a gardner?

good stuff here...

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
9 posted 2002-12-13 09:50 AM


You too

I love this!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
10 posted 2002-12-13 07:41 PM


powerful! Yes, I like this one!
Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-12-13 08:37 PM




(sigh) Wow, I love the energy and clarity in this, sweet friend, you always are amazing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
12 posted 2004-06-06 02:52 PM


I love ya, always a real woman.
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