A Bright Shinning Star (A Haiku)

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Open Poetry #23

A Bright Shinning Star (A Haiku)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-12-12 08:55 PM

A bright shinning star
Led to where he was lying
On that special night

12-12-02

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-12-12 08:57 PM

SmartChick - so this is how you found me there...

BC

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2002-12-12 09:00 PM

Ah brilliant. Makes me want to sing away in the manger for some reason...
or maybe I've just wanted to sing it, and your reminder sparked it again

anyway, thanks, well done.

Always, GG

- And so it was that time stood still -

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-12-12 10:02 PM

Oh, Sue this was very special.
I enjoyed your poem very much.

P.S. I believe it should be "shining".

~ Christmas blessings to you!

Linda

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-12-12 10:03 PM

How beautiful! Well Done!
ThisDiamond

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-12-12 10:09 PM

Sue, this is very good. I like it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2002-12-12 10:55 PM

Thank you all for your replies. I am glad you like it.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-12-13 12:24 PM

Keep on writing and I will read *s
hugssss
M

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

8 posted 2002-12-13 12:28 PM

Serendipity.
Shining from a twinkling star.
Has taken me here.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-12-13 12:29 PM

(smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You! (kiss on cheek) You always shine like a star across these pages, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-12-14 08:53 PM

enjoy your read

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