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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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Chilling, northerly winds lashed the snow-capped peaks, forming whirling funnels of white that whipped about me in these, the twilight hours of my life. With the sinking of the sun, snow devils appeared as spectral beings searching the lonely reaches of this faraway place. The virgin forest was being laid bare and vulnerable as the winds of change stripped the insulating cloaks of sable from the once proud stands of spruce and pines. In the swiftly dying light, the dazzling beauty of late afternoon suns had been replaced by deep, soulless grays. A chill had invaded my bones as I trudged onward--lost, cold, and losing my hold on reality. Snow had begun to fall heavily and my vision was soon limited to only a few feet before me. I could no longer see the proverbial forest for the trees... This dwindling trail of desolation that I had found myself on, eventually disappeared and I plunged into the depths of despair and desperation... Yet still, I plodded on through this nightmare landscape devoid of detail--onward and upward--hoping that I would once again, find my way back onto my destined path and into the Light. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-12-2002 06:36 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
LINDA! Well, for crying out loud! This is spectacular, Ms. Poetess of capturing real scenery with equally real feelings. Fantastically balanced and very, very much enjoyed. Thank you, this is a gem. Hugs, and warmest regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
cold adventure here... reminds me of jack London stories in some ways... not you usual style.. but the message in this is clear... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
burr! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat ~ I appreciate your thoughtful and enthusiastic reply! I thought I'd stretch my poetic wings and write in a different style and about something less pollyanna. This poem does not reflect my life or my outlook on getting older. My life is full of sunlight, but when clouds try to get in my way, I banish them!---but until they disappear I know that the sun is still shining behind them! ~ warm, sunny hugs Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captain ~ I thought I'd write something that was a departure from my usual style and content. I had to put myself in a different place, so to speak. Thank you for reading and replying! EA |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
A very good write Earth Angel...and knowing that the sun still shines behind the clouds will keep you a little warmer. Enjoyed your decriptive words. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. --Deepak Chop [This message has been edited by Salty (12-12-2002 03:49 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Fascinating! I enjoyed reading this and dear sister, if you ever get lost, give a yell. I'm ready with candles to light your way. Luvs, 'M' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Salty ~ Thank you, dear spice of life!--and yes, knowing that the sun is still shining behind the clouds does keep me warmer! ~ May your path in life be lit by guiding light EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passingshadows ~ ~ sending you some warms hugs to warm you up! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'M' ~ Thank you, dear sister soul!--I will call you if I need some of your light to guide me if mine starts to flicker and dim! Fortunately, that is not presently the case ---this poem was just a poetic exercise for me! BTW, I extend the same generous offer to you as well! warm hugs Linda |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very pretty descriptive writing gal....it reminds me of one LongJohn wrote once..go take a look: /pip/Forum72/HTML/000897.html |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe ~ Thank you for the "descriptive" reply! I checked out LJ's snickerdoodle of a poem! LOL EA |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I must say that I'm finding your writing lately to have much more depth and imagination. This is a VERY well done piece. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Auguste ~ I thank you for that!--and for appreciating my imagination! ~ May you always be warm and in the light EA |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Dust devils in the south, snow devils in the north, blind we find ourselves as alone as birth and death. Great description. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
RSWells ~ I enjoyed reading your reply!--and "great description" put an appreciative smile on my face! Thank you! EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Linda, this is wonderful, sweet friend, and ever since you have come into the sunlight every day you always glow with such warmth like an angel to us all, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I've been there too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Spectacular raph |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very well-written, Ms. Linda. Thank you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Vivid images in this soul-searcher..grabs the reader and pulls her into the journey--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ That was a sweetie pie of a reply!--from a real sweetie pie of a princely, poetic person! Thank you dear one! ~ warm hugs and angel kisses EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
raph ~ Why, thank you, kind sir! "Spectacular" is such a spectacular word! ~ hugs and smiles EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ You're quite welcome! The pleasure was mine to write and to receive such warm and thoughtful responses! Thank you, dear poet friend! ~ May a warm, guiding light illuminate your path in life! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sandpiper ~ "Vivid images in this soul-searcher"---I really appreciate these thoughtful and insightful words! Thank you, dear Sandpiper---BTW, that is an adorable pseudonym! ~ May your days and nights be filled with the joy of living your life's purpose EA |
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