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Radrook
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0 posted 2002-12-12 02:09 AM




There's a sweaty fat rat
with a squinting red eye
that glints at the sky
when it winks a good-bye
as it grins at the roots
of my entwining hair
which encircles my boots
as I sit in my lair.




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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-12 02:17 AM


Having a Dr. Suess night? LOL.
or is it a Doctor sues story?

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-12-12 02:22 AM


My Goodness  


You are having a time of it tonight, aren't you?  
As I got into reading this, it seemed as if I was
reading in rhythm like a rap tune.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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