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An Oath of Love (teenage romance)

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Aenimal
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0 posted 12-12-2002 12:25 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aenimal

That I may stand once more with pride
And have you always by my side
For you, my heart is yours to keep
to comfort you awake in asleep
By gentle Kiss and smiling face
may sadness, happiness replace
Take shelter from this world in me
On wings of fire I'll set us free
to soar above what makes us sad
and bring us joys we've never had
This and more to you I swear
if you to me in love would bare
Your heart, your soul, your mind, and thoughts
and be the one whom I have saught
Though promises hold seldom true
Upon my life this oath for you


****Another ancient one from my high school notebook, I always was a cheesy romantic I guess lol***


[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-12-2002 12:55 AM).]

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1 posted 12-12-2002 02:21 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Cheesy is cool. You wanted complete and total bareness...of soul.
Ya, right. LOL. Kidding aside, nice poem Raph.
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cheesy is good
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3 posted 12-12-2002 02:28 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Raph, you hopeless romantic you,  

I don't care if you think it's "cheesy", or not, this hopeless romantic likes it....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 12-12-2002 06:37 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess


yes, romantic,
but there is not just one soulmate out there for you, .........ive discovered this anyhow
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5 posted 12-12-2002 08:26 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

romantic... yes.. this given to someone today would still be as touching...

enjoyed
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Aenimal
It still reads well, enjoyed.
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7 posted 12-12-2002 09:58 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

This poem of love is far superior to any of the ones I received from my highschool sweethearts! Words such as these would have totally captivated me!

~ Bring on some more of this delicious "cheese"!

EA
Aenimal
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Midnite I always want the bareness you speak of..lol

Thanks passing!

Ethel what can I say i love to love

inkedgoddess Love is love but I'm still looking for my first soul mate

Sweet thing to say Cpat

Seymour thank you it's not quite my style but glad it holds up

EA that's sweet and you know what goes well with cheese? Wine you bring the bottle I'll bring the words


Honeybee
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9 posted 07-07-2003 11:48 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Raph, I like this side of you...
this flows well, and it's sentiment is beautiful.
And AHEM it will happen...one of these days!  Cause I'm your manager and I say so

Yep, this is a keeper

Melissa

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10 posted 06-06-2004 02:23 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

You're so cheesy! How much easier was it being a teen? sighhhhhhh

love ya cheeseball.
Dark Angel
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11 posted 06-06-2004 06:27 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

you're cute when you're cheesy bello *winkies*

Enjoyed.

Mxx

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