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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-12-11 01:58 PM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#108"

Copyright 2002 by:  MARK V SHELDON


stagnant

feet deep
in dirt-filled
ground

extending branches
entwined

in you


"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-12-11 02:01 PM




(smiles) Oh Mark, it is the roots that hold steady the foundation of true love, and with a deserving heart like yours your roots will always be submerged deep down in eternitys soil! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-12-11 02:02 PM


ah a very surreal image it paints...


Enjoyed for the imagery and for the message


Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-12-11 02:21 PM


Oh yes...much enjoyed Mark!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Aenimal
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4 posted 2002-12-11 04:32 PM


Agreed with Cpat surreal images, a beautiful Daliesque painting Mark, thanks for sharing all your masterpieces here


raph

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nicolecruz
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5 posted 2002-12-11 05:11 PM


i enjoyed this thoroughly. the images of salvation and stasis are beautifully and subtlely achieved. i love the phrase "entwined i you." absolutely gorgeous.
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6 posted 2002-12-11 05:16 PM




Oh my. Very much enjoyed.


Warm regards, Pat



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2002-12-11 05:34 PM


Noah -- true, but roots can easily be uplifted when one falls...  (in love...or down...)

Thanks, Ron...  a lot of these TOL's do remind me of abstracts...

A for you, Nancy.

Raph, thank YOU for enjoying them.  The mind is the ultimate palette...

Nicole -- a most warm thank you and welcome to "my" gallery...  Until we read again...

Thank you, Pat...  half the fun of these pieces is to read the reactions elicited by the different readers.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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