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rm711
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0 posted 2002-12-11 12:37 PM



I guess it must be just from where I’m standing
But you’ve changed

I don’t know yet
If it’s for the better
Or worse
But I do know
That it hurts

I regret saying goodbye
Before you had the chance
To show me who you were

The person you have chosen to leave behind
May have been
The only one to ever accept me

The colour of day
Has fallen today
But my rainbow will someday return

In another way
But you will always stay
A part of me.

"Some men see things as they are and say why? I dream things that never were and say why not?"
Rosie Mitchell

© Copyright 2002 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-11 01:16 PM


yes your rainbow will return someday...


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2 posted 2002-12-11 01:38 PM




(big hugggssssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort your way and for rainbows hues to again color your world! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rosie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-12-11 02:14 PM


yeah, I know well.
Robert Adamson
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4 posted 2002-12-11 02:55 PM


I like to believe in making friends for life. Thus, I like the meaning of this poem. Thank you.

etoodog

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