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She Lives |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She Lives Her essence light’s the harem of my nights With butterfly flights and firefly bright. On whispering breeze and moon dancing leaves On the silver and shadows of the trees. She takes my hand and pulls me along With a touch of grace and hum of a song Traces her steps the sanctum of my mind And I follow her like the Braille to the blind. I stay with her in utter delight And play through the flutter of the night She shawls me with a web of enslave Sooths every gossamer, crave of this knave. She’s the will-o’-the-wisp dazzles my eye The wonder and phantom of my wiles sigh Dissolving the fines of my agony While pouring me wines of ecstasy. She is to me a ghost and a host That sheds me of realities roast. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) Moreover, YOU live in your words and bring life to these pages, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, I just love to read about your thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing them with us..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sy... beautifully done... touching and sincere. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful read this morning Sy! Made me *sigh* already, ya did! ~Morning Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Just lovely. sighing here, too. Enjoyed a great deal. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She's a wonder, she is! This is delightful, Sy, seem's like Randy's flying high! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - wonderfully graceful words this morning. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Her essence light's the harem of my nights With butterfly flights and firefly bright. On whispering breeze and moon dancing leaves On the silver and shadows of the trees. She takes my hand and pulls me along With a touch of grace and hum of a song Traces her steps the sanctum of my mind And I follow her like the Braille to the blind. I stay with her in utter delight And play through the flutter of the night She shawls me with a web of enslave Sooths every gossamer, crave of this knave. She's the will-o'-the-wisp dazzles my eye The wonder and phantom of my wiles sigh ========================== Randy may have a harem... but you ... Im NOT sharing!!!!! LOL  and tell Randy to get ready to fly... cuz when you write like this, all I can do is sigh! *SIGH* *ww*  just one line ... one rhyme ... one metered verse ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You wear your heart on your sleeve...it is beautiful to see. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Nice reply thank you. garysgirl My pleasure, thanks for the read and reply. Cpat Hair Glad you enjoyed. Enchantress Hugs back sweet. Pat, Thank you so much. Sunshine He's up he's down he's all around town. Chris, Glad you enjoyed. Jm, Randy said he'd take me to you anytime I wanted. I think he's looking for excuses to get to your place. Winkiewinkie. Thank you for the answer I wanted to read. WWRS  Martie Thank you for taking notice. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
A spring bouquet in winter's cold--enjoyed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper Thank you for the read and reply. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is avery beautiful poem, very tender and loving Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Thank you for the read and comment. Sy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mushy and romantic...I love it! |
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