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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-12-11 04:23 AM


In Lack of
Her Kiss

I inquired of the status of my relationship.
Was it progressing as hoped with the passage of time
or was it pretty much bogged down at the starting line.
Could it stand up to the test of time
or would it be finished in a matter of time.
Am I still the recipient of her tenderness
or am I one now experiencing emptiness.
Am I enjoying the pleasure of her sweet kiss
or am I living in lack of her kiss.
What follows is the status of my relationship.
Bogged down at the starting line.
Finished in a matter of time.
Experiencing emptiness.
Living in lack of
her kiss.

JamesLee
December10
2002


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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
1 posted 2002-12-11 06:49 AM


if only we could really enjoy it at the time, without thinking so much ahead,
such a hard concept to follow

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-12-11 01:48 PM




(big hugggsssssss) If you truly feel you're back at the starting line, cut corners to her and let her know how you feel as one deserves not to feel unhappy without the other knowing the loss of satisfaction! (sigh) I send angel hugs of comfort your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Salty
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
3 posted 2002-12-11 01:50 PM


THis was wrote perfectly
Each line asking
each line
sinking


Very capturing

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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