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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-12-11 04:01 AM


Love  (True and Genuine)

Like a Marathon runner
focusing body and soul.
Fully determined to
achieve a goal.
No obstacle can stop
them from clocking
their time.
Those who finish
the race will
possess love.
True and
genuine.

JamesLee
December10
2002
The Honolulu
Marathon was
on Sunday.

© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-12-11 08:31 AM


interesting take on love... enjoyed.
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2 posted 2002-12-11 01:53 PM




(smiles) Oh James, it is amazing how our closest surroundings can inspire the greatest things, I just love this metaphor, like Prefontaine, run...run...run! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ariana
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3 posted 2002-12-11 02:09 PM


James
Yes it is true "Those who finish
the race will possess love.  True and
genuine."  It is just getting over those HUGE hurdles that could kill someone.  Enjoyed!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2002-12-11 02:37 PM


sometimes the track is long...so long
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5 posted 2002-12-11 05:02 PM


enjoyed
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