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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-12-10 08:22 PM


“TOUCHING ME”’
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When I was young
I believed love
would touch me
in ways I only
dreamed of, but
then I saw you,
and my eyes
beheld your beauty…

Now I wonder if you
would teach me
about tenderness,
softness, and emotions
I always dreamed
about and more…

Through the years
I’ve wondered, and now
that I’ve seen you
I wonder even more,
if you would
touch me with you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-12-10 08:34 PM


Bill this is so sweet and loving.  Well done.  Hugs.
Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-12-10 08:36 PM


Bill...Romantically beautiful.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-12-10 08:41 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is so lovely, sweet friend, and may your golden heart always be touched with true loves words! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-12-10 08:45 PM


Oh Bill, from what I've read in your poems, no one needs to teach you 'about tenderness, softness, and emotions.'

You are the master of love and romance.

Huggles of Cheer, Marti    

Martie
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5 posted 2002-12-10 08:59 PM


Bill

I agree with Marti...you got tender romance down!

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6 posted 2002-12-10 09:06 PM


Tender and touching Bill. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Salty
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7 posted 2002-12-10 09:17 PM


This is absolutely beautiful....especially loved the last line.


Very Nice write!!

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2002-12-10 09:25 PM


bill,

you seem to be quite capable of teaching too,
this is heavenly

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9 posted 2002-12-10 10:58 PM


Bill, this is beuatiful. Thank you for sharing.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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10 posted 2002-12-11 08:46 PM


enjoy
Sunshine
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11 posted 2002-12-11 09:28 PM



Bill, beautiful lines!

fishop
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12 posted 2002-12-12 12:06 PM


Now I wonder if you
would teach me
about tenderness,
softness, and emotions
I always dreamed
about and more…

She'll teach you allright, but you'r gonna have to wing most of it.  

Nice job.  Go get her.


regards2you
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13 posted 2002-12-12 07:18 AM




Yes Bill, It takes two to tango; we all know how you love to dance. May you find a partner equally as romantic as yourself, giving back to you all the tender heartedness you project to us in your wonderful poetry. Thank you.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2002-12-12 11:10 AM


...perhaps, if there weren't so many miles between us! tehe

~ You sure know how to get hearts to flutter

EA

WhiteRose
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15 posted 2002-12-13 09:37 AM


I agree with Linda

If only we lived closer, I'd reach out and touch ya, sans the phone.

A wonderfully sweet write Bill..

Sunnyone
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16 posted 2002-12-13 09:57 AM


Bill, it's always good to know that you haven't lost your touch!!! Enjoyed...~~S~~
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