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Rain (#3 of twenty or less) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Rain gently flowing from the sky sounds as if the Heavens softly cry As I'm listening |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Listen to the gentle rains, yes. Violent thunderstorms? Find shelter. Enjoyed the weather report, Ethel. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ethel I am a sucker for the sounds of rain. They are so peaceful. A beautiful write, thanks for sharing! Hugs. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, it's raining here in sunny Florida.... No thunderstorms.....not yet, anyway, but maybe later today. I don't like the thunderstorms, either.  (and that's the weather report for today... HeeHee....   "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Me too, Linda, when it's just raining gently, and not storming..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I believe each rain storm tells a different story. Some softly cry...some scream out with thunder....some rock in celebration. we just need to stop and listen sometime...as you just did. A Most excellent write! In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, I like this. I too, love the rain.However, this morning it is cold, raining, and very, very foggy, and I HAVE to go out in it. Yuk! Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Salty.... Yeah, I've been hearing the rain all morning here in sunny Florida.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ooooohhhhh, Pat..... I'm glad I don't have to go out in it today. I'd rather just listen to it and have good thoughts..... Be careful driving in the rain.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I wish I lived down in Florida where my sweet Joanna lives or somewhere where it is warm and rains, as out here in Colorado it is a desert and I miss the rain! (kiss on cheek) I need my angel tears now now now! (giggles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-10-2002 01:04 PM).] |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
This was very beautiful. I absolutely loved it. Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yep....it's raining in 'Bama too....but the sun will dry it up....as it does tears don't ya know......the sweet sunny south is hard to beat ain't it gal?.....Nice write |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It does sound that way sometimes and it takes one's emotions right up into thier throat....I'm listening too..... Nice writing! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Lovely Ethel, nothing quite as mesmerizing as watching,and hearing, a rain shower. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Ethel...I love the rain.. But at this time of year will settle for the snow. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is gentle and beautiful. I love it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Wow. That's beautiful. I usually get annoyed with people who write something tiny like that, but probably because they don't know how. You preserve the poetic flow of the words. You really have a way of working with the music of language, rather than working through it. You've put a tremendous amount of power into a very short piece and that brings you my admiration. *Shay~D* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, Thanks so much for your sweet comments. Hey...I didn't know that Joanna lives in Florida. Does she like it here? Kielo, Thank you very much for reading and replying to my poem. I appreciate it. Toerag, Yeah, Toe, the sun will dry it up. The sun's supposed to shine tomorrow. Yep, you got it right about the South, too. I don't think living in the sunny South CAN be beat!! Thank you all .... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-10-2002 09:45 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, Yeah, it does. Keep listening.....the rain has good sounds. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, You're right...the rain makes me very relaxed and sleepy. I love to sleep while it's raining.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy Lee, Yeah, I would like to see the snow, but I wouldn't like the cold that goes with it.... Nan, Thanks so much for reading my poem and for replying to it, too. I appreciate it.... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-10-2002 09:53 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eromyna, Welcome to Passions In Poetry. And thank you very much for the nice comments you made in your reply to my poem. I really do appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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