navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » THATS RIGHT I'M BACK!
Open Poetry #23
Post A Reply Post New Topic THATS RIGHT I'M BACK! Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Nikolette Sadness
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2002-12-10 04:20 AM


That's right kids I'm back! Aren't you all just wondering what kind of depressing poem I have conjured up this time? hehehe... well its kinda in between depressing and hmmmmm i dunno its sad but not sad yknow? heheh anyways hope you guys like it and youll be seeing more of me from now on! hehe

PS i'm gettin hitched!


~Everytime~
Everytime you smile at me
my heart skips a beat.
Your subtle grin
so soft and sweet.

Everytime you turnaway
I feel my heart breaking.
You cant see it
but inside I'm aching.

When you touch me
in that gentle way you do
it calms my nerves
just being next to you.

but when you pull away from me
it hust me deep inside.
You could never measure
all the tears I've cried.

so smile when you look at me
and hold me tight to you
show me that you love
because you know that I Love You.

Nikolette Sadness


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2002 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-12-10 04:21 AM


Lovely and romantic and Congrats!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2002-12-10 04:22 AM


I'm so happy for you!!! Wow! What news to share!!! Congratulations! WHOOHOO!!!

Glad you're back...stay awhile?

Nikolette Sadness
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337
port richey fl.
3 posted 2002-12-10 04:52 AM


heheh thanks guys! and yes ill be back fro good now! i hope heheh unless {god forbid} my comp crashes!

nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-12-10 06:12 AM


It is good to have a fellow poet back!  Congratulations also.  This poem shares a part of your heart.  
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-12-10 06:38 AM



Y'know, the lost ones always come home at Christmas!     Welcome home, Nikolette...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2002-12-10 06:44 AM


Welcome home, and what an entrance!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
7 posted 2002-12-10 11:13 AM


Congrats! Do you know you have a big smile on your face?
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
8 posted 2002-12-10 11:21 AM


Hey Nikolette...
I came here while you were gone, so I don't know you, yet. I'm glad to meet you, and your poetry. (it sounded happy to me...)  
It sounds like you got homesick, and I'm glad, because I like the way you write.

WELCOME  HOME,  NICKOLETTE  !!
  


Oh, I forgot to congratulate you on your engagement...
CONGRATULATIONS



"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-10-2002 11:24 AM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2002-12-11 03:31 AM


Beautiful and not sad...James
Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
10 posted 2002-12-11 08:04 AM


Nice write Nik....welcome back....If a Japanese guy ate you would he quit smoking?......

[This message has been edited by Toerag (12-11-2002 08:07 AM).]

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » THATS RIGHT I'M BACK!

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary