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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-09 08:47 PM

the moon is hidden
beneath
the cloud covers,
much like the truth
of this love affair,
wrapped in the veil
of secrecy
we've woven

come to me
tonight,
lover,
in a dream
of desire,
touch my lips
with your kiss,
awaken me
from this
deep well of sleep,
with your
faith in us,
take me
from here,
where we can
embrace
without shadows

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-12-09 08:53 PM

nicely done!!
it flows one section to the next and flawlessly tells a story... I enjoyed!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2002-12-09 08:53 PM

Amazing write inkedgoddess..and it's something I can relate to having been through this long ago.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-12-09 09:12 PM

inkedgoddess - most sensitive sensuous write. Very tender are your words, also your thoughts...
BC

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-12-09 09:21 PM

Very nice poem!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-12-09 09:25 PM

Yes...superbly written....

Once the veil is lifted....and the shadows
are shed....then and only then can this
love be complete....

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2002-12-09 09:29 PM

inkedgoddess,

I liked this a lot, from beginning to end, it flows nicely and you tied in the secrecy with lines in the poem...
skilled and talented you are....

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2002-12-09 10:57 PM

thanks for the nice words.....
cpat......glad i could please this time

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-12-10 03:49 AM

I hate to say I know this well....very good write

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-12-11 03:36 AM

Like this...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2002-12-11 12:27 PM

Love is such a powerful force...it thrives best in the light where it can be free.
Well done. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-12-11 01:36 PM

(sigh) This is so gorgeous, sweet friend, I wish for this joy to always fill your heart and for loves moon to always cast rays upon your heart! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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