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Inside Grin 20/LESS
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Inside Grin 20/LESS |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Secretly, I've an inside grin. Sparkling eyes! Whirling, I'm light and dizzy on vibes, when ~You're Near~ . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (12-09-2002 10:17 PM).] |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
awwwwwwww...schweeeeeeeeet!!  "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I hate that red color but that cannot be edited to change.... ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (12-09-2002 09:36 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
putting on colored glasses....changing it to a pleasant blue....or perhaps gold...?? Pat...nice! lots for a little, that is what I call it when someone writes a message that well.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Good vibes in this.  Read in red it still reads golden. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pat Sounds better than Disneyland! [This message has been edited by Martie (12-09-2002 10:02 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sandpiper, Thanks for responding and the schweeeeet. Barry, Thank you. Appreciate you reading and replying. (can't believe that color!) Nice response. Lots for little but it could have been much more. Edited on-line and that didn't help much. This did not exactly convey what I had intended. Midnitesun, Sweet reply. Thanks... Martie, There were two words I removed and the whirl was important to them, but, it was totally not romantic; this is one you kinda (not you!) smiling, but some of us hope just gets buried quickly... needs a rewrite with a little more thought. Thanks for replying. Hugs to you all, Pat . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (12-09-2002 10:34 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe...liked this! |
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