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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-12-09 05:28 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * * *

Last night as I lay sleeping
I had a dream about you
A smile crept across my face
As your image came into view

I felt the bed beside me
And I touched your familiar form
All my senses were awakened
As I felt your skin so soft and warm

I disturbed your gentle slumber
Soon your eyes were open wide
No words were actually spoken
My feelings I could no longer hide

Our bodies did the talking
As we moved to and fro
We were in tune with one another
As we made love nice and slow

In the afterglow of love
I lay here and reminisce
As I remember with much fondness
The passion within your kiss

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-12-09 05:36 PM


nicely romantic... enough to make one swear off cynical thoughts... almost....

I enjoyed


Magnus
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2 posted 2002-12-09 05:41 PM


Chuckling at the first response....

I agree...and this is a very passionate
poem...complemented well by an appropriate
pic..  Nicely done SueT...

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-12-09 06:00 PM


Well, you certainly have worked your charm on your first two readers!

You are a softly sensuous writer, sweet Sue!

EA


regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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4 posted 2002-12-09 07:31 PM




This is indeed, quite special and I enjoyed it a great deal. Made me remember those sweeter moments in a relationship.

Warm regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-12-09 11:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, you are one of the most wonderful love poets and one of the most talented I know, who also has a golden heart of love and angelic compassion! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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