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LADY_DEATH
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0 posted 2002-12-09 03:27 PM


The demons in our minds
Belong buried deep
In the ground
Recalling these beasts
Brings us closer to death
Shattering our lives
With tortured memories
And leaving us alone forever
Only with guilt and shame

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Amature2
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1 posted 2002-12-09 07:04 PM


This reminds me of something I wrote a while back, but never posted. "Things In Our Mind" I know the feeling. Thank you for sharing
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2 posted 2002-12-10 12:00 PM


So easy to say and so hard to do....those demons difinitely need to stay buried but most of us haven't figured out how to do that and we allow them to continue to haunt us. This is good writing...gets one to think. Thank you..
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3 posted 2002-12-10 09:04 AM



There is a way to process guilt and shame and I do not believe in burying them in our minds; they still torture us subconsciously if not grieved.

There is so much help available to  take care of these issues, it is almost a crime not to deal with them.

We all think we are so unique that no one else could have thought or done the horrific things which we allowed to happen. NOBODY is that unique!

By not processing it, there are many going around hurting because of them when sometimes a simple, heartfelt admission, and sincere I am sorry, are all that's needed for healing to begin. Even if that is unacceptable to the abused, the abuser has a cleaner slate to move forward in life..having done whatever possible to rectify the deed; problem is that often costs more than some are willing to pay. And the pattern usually continues, rotting minds, hearts and souls.

Christ's favorite people, whom He spent the most time with were the ones loaded with shame and guilt. He loved them, wonder why. You do not have to be a Christian to get well. I could go on and on, so I'll only say thank you for this poem. It is important!

Hugs and warm regards. Pat
  

  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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4 posted 2002-12-10 09:47 AM


Glad I don't have any in my mind. A couple of them tried to hang out in the pit of my stomach, but I found a way to release them.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-12-10 09:51 AM


LADY_DEATH
True, enjoyed the read.

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