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PPsphere
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since 2002-12-08
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Minnwisowa, USA

0 posted 2002-12-08 05:50 PM


http://artists.iuma.com/site-bin/ramgen.ram?aid=77416&sid=295855
---------> CLICK THE ABOVE LINK TO HEAR IN rEALaUDIO NoW<------------
"To Discriminating Elitist Rulers"


09-26-00 04:40 PM

I can think her what she
feels her punishment
cure for me was to be - -
She thought,
I needed her when
all we did was play
a game,
as she gave nought,
...Oh, and I won.
I broke the shackles,
climbed the wall,
kicked down her garden gate,
All her rose were forlorn
the bloom was long,
long gone.
I broke her mind,
were
she brighter the pain
and shock would make
her grow....
But she sat her
girlfriends in a row,
she claimed she dumped
me, but I know
there was not much of a glow
on her roses from the start.
She suffered from birth
the falsest heart,
imitating what she admired,
and,
untrue,
unable,
could not aspire,
but
could only hope her wealth
could hire,
a coziness, a sort of shield
to keep her
from seeing her heart,
which good word
will never yield.
Revile not what you
Choose not to understand,
And never honor that
Which you know not.

magmavibe
http://artists.iuma.com/site-bin/ramgen.ram?aid=77416&sid=295855
<-----------that clicky linky will allow you to hear
the poem in Real Audio right now<----------------

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-08 06:05 PM


Shaking my head as I walk away.
But welcome to the poetry pages.
Variety is the spice of life, but I use different seasonings apparently.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-08-2002 07:35 PM).]

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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2 posted 2002-12-08 06:13 PM



PP,

My reciever can't pick up the sound.
I couldn't quite understand the last two lines, when read. but.....

Welcome to Passions.

Look forward to other of your poetry.

Regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-12-08 06:43 PM


I tried to listen to it, too, but couldn't get it to come up
on my player?!?  Anyway, welcome to Passions In Poetry. Maybe I
will see (hear) more of you poetry.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

PPsphere
New Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 5
Minnwisowa, USA
4 posted 2002-12-08 07:48 PM


thanks so much for writing back
some BBs won't let hyperlinks on the BB
fearing you will pull the reader off....the
Real One Player...if it is OK for you
will just pop up on the BB page and play..
it works OK for me...I tried it here to see
it might be it is UPDATE time...I never paid Real Player for the whole layout..in fact paid them nothing

all in all it is a cool service if you started to use it...and there are many sites that will post your sound files for nothing

HERE are my other links....to PP
.

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PP's Story and Poetry Site!
http://webpages.charter.net/pprochnow

PP's Sound and Audio Site!
http://artists.iuma.com/IUMA/Bands/PPsphere/

PPz4um
http://forums.delphiforums.com/PPz4um/mesages


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