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Haiku 2
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Haiku 2 I fought the windmill That only the wind can turn And got a wind burn |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
A new form from you! This is a pleasant surprise, very ~powerful~ and wise. Enjoyed a great deal. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've got some raspberry flavored chapstick and some winkies... will that make the burn feel better? *L*  next time...slide down a rainbow *L* "wind burn" (yer so kewl)    just one line ... one rhyme ... one metered verse ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah so clever Sy! Cute one! ~Morning hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Every day I come to find a turning spin of your mind today Haiku form I see the sparking of your mystery... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Thank you my dear. JM, Maybe the burn but not the yearn. WWRS  Enchantress Ah so, thank you. Hugs Sunshine Without you it is a gray day. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! Has our soneteer become a haikuateer? tehe This was delightful! P.S. I have made a wonderful aromatherapy blend to take the sting out of your windburn! If you like, I could apply it for you! EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Many have fought the windmill...and the wind... Eloquently penned. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel It would be my delight. ThisDiamond I know, I am just one of many. Thak you |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
trying to fool with Mother Nature, eh? good poem! snappy ending! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Thank you for the snappy reply LOL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy~ I enjoyed this bit of something different from you. Very creative and nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, very cleverly penned! Hugs, Marti |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
No offense, but why am I seeing Isabel in my mind - now you know I luv you both right? he he, the  got me! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, still very wise words in only a few. Ouch!! "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-08-2002 01:31 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, Thank you and hugs back. Thank you Marti. Sharon, You clever little devil. garysgirl Enjoyed your reply. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Looks like you have a lot of that Don Quixote blood in you! LOL! (big hugggsssssss) This is a new side of you I've never seen, sweet friend, but I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Whistling through the wind Sy sighs as windmill words wizz Chill out Isabel! Chill out Isabel! Chill out Isabel! Oh Isabel, you are such fun to tease [This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-08-2002 04:03 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thats a side of you I've never seen. I enjoyed it, you should write more haiku. (watch out, I really can burn you, I'm not all sugar and cake ya know )Never be normal! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend, I'll have to think up some more. Sharon, You tease the devils first mate. LOL Wind, You mean your whipped cream could melt? LOL Thanx for the comment. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...nice |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows Thanks for the WOW. |
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