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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-12-08 06:39 AM


A Castle

He went to build himself a castle
On top of it he even put a tassle
All purple and pink
Without even a sink
It was built in a town called Newcastle
© By Sue 10/20/01
  


© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2002-12-08 08:40 AM


Good start.

there once was a man from Newcastle
which built a round house- no hassle
but, he got to thinking
when his socks started stinking
with no windows- it’s a capsule

ping

Computer
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Norfolk, NE
2 posted 2002-12-08 10:08 AM


There once was a man from ... nevermind.
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-12-08 10:29 AM


I love to see your spirits picking up and writing such a fun poem! You really are on the mend, dear sweet Sue!

~ Big smile and a huge hug!

Linda

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4 posted 2002-12-08 03:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, I'm so happy to see you writing these playful upbeat poems, sweet friend, I hope things are improving for you as I wish you great joy and for you to feel like the princess of your castle on the rainbow! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-12-08 03:41 PM


Hey sweet friend,

I'm also glad to see you writing these cute poems. This one
is delightful. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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