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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-12-07 11:33 PM




Songs of Hearts
played within
golden notes
keyed in
harmony.

You
and
Me.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-07-2002 11:40 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-12-08 03:10 AM


Kacy, so much feelings felt through such few words.......
beautiful.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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2 posted 2002-12-08 04:49 AM


Ah the beautiful music that two hearts make. Thank you Midnite for reminding me of its sweet song.
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3 posted 2002-12-08 07:24 AM




Kacy,

This is pretty...feels good and causes me to smile.


Hugs, Pat

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MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2002-12-08 09:53 AM


Two hearts
In tune
Resonate
Melifluously

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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5 posted 2002-12-08 10:33 AM


You definitely struck a chord with this little song of the heart!

EA

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6 posted 2002-12-08 03:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, may your golden heart always hum happily with the keys of the angels! (kiss on cheek) This is an angelic masterpiece, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Christopher
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7 posted 2002-12-08 07:38 PM


You so have to forgive me... but shouldn't that be "you and I?"
Midnitesun
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8 posted 2002-12-08 07:59 PM


ROTFLMAO, Chris. Maybe so, but it didn't rhyme with harmony. Isn't it called taking poetic license?
OK, ok, so now I just lost my license. Sheesh!

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9 posted 2002-12-08 08:57 PM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2002-12-08 10:35 PM


Really enjoyed this! Impressed with the seemingly endless wealth of image and emotion you were able to both capture and share with such a small sprinkling of words.

P.S.>
Period, comma, I, or Me
As author wishes, it should be

(NOT attacking Christopher...just my humble opinion)

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