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quik
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0 posted 2002-12-07 11:33 PM




Pretty blonde hair with light blue eyes
That sparkles in the night
She seems like she is in disquise
But will not put up with a fight
Everyone seems like she is the wierd one
And she does not know why
All she want is to have fun
But feeling inside she wants to die
She feels insecure about her surroundings
People may laugh
She finds them astounding
But she just thinks about the past
About her old school
And how it was fun
She now thinks they are fools
Now its done
She doesnt feel left out anymore
And thats a good thing
She now thinks about important things before
And now she talks to the teachers
What do you think there for?
She feels happy and secure
With her teachers and friends
And now that she is in for
She has people by her side until the end

© Copyright 2002 Antonio Duran Weary - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-08 03:14 AM


Antonio, it sounds like she has a true friend in you.
Thanks for sharing your feelings with us.
I enjoyed your poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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